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  • yahola

Need a beta reader for a short fic

I wrote a missing scene set in the episode Burned and am looking for someone to give it a beta read.

It's from Horatio's POV, gen fic, rated pg -13, about 1300 words.

It definitely needs a check for spelling/grammar, perhaps even a critical eye towards characterization...
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  • yahola

Fic: Unquenchable 4/5

Fandom: CSI: Miami
Title: Unquenchable
Author: Yahola
Spoilers: Kill Switch, Burned
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Horatio/Ryan (slash)
Summary: Horatio has an eye-opening revelation, faces temptation and fights some character flaws until he comes up with a plan.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters...
Author’s Note: Thanks to octobertwelfth, who betaed this :)


Chapter Four

Early in the morning, too early to run into Rick Stetler, Caine stared out of the window of interrogation room eight.
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  • yahola

Fic: Unquenchable 3/5

Spoilers: Kill Switch, Burned
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Horatio/Ryan (slash)
Summary: Horatio has an eye-opening revelation, faces temptation and fights some character flaws until he comes up with a plan.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters...
Author’s Note: Thanks to octobertwelfth, who betaed this :)

Chapter Three

Rick had prodded and poked but the evidence from the scene – the fingerprints on the crowbar, the reddening marks on Ryan’s throat, the way the bullet had entered the body - was supporting Horatio’s story.
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  • yahola

Fic: Unquenchable 2/5

Fandom: CSI: Miami
Title: Unquenchable
Author: Yahola
Spoilers: Kill Switch
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Horatio/Ryan (slash)
Summary: Horatio has an eye-opening revelation, faces temptation and fights some character flaws until he comes up with a plan.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters...
Author’s Note: Thanks to octobertwelfth, who betaed this :)

Chapter Two

The corpse of Claire Mills had been dragged through the gigantic air vent shaft, so the natural thing for any CSI was to search it for any traces left.
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  • yahola

Fanfic:Unquenchable 1/5

Fandom: CSI: Miami
Title: Unquenchable
Author: Yahola
Spoilers: Kill Switch
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Horatio/Ryan (slash)
Summary: Horatio has an eye-opening revelation, faces temptation and fights some character flaws until he comes up with a plan.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters...
Author’s Note: Thanks to octobertwelfth, who betaed this :)

Chapter One

Alexx caught up with Horatio in front of the MDPD Crime lab, right after he had parked the Hummer.
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  • yahola

Searching for beta

Hi,

I'm looking for a beta reader for a Horatio/Ryan fanfic.
It's mostly introspective from H's point of view mentions some sex but isn't very explicit 8Rating PG-13 or mature (I'm not sure), length is about 7 Word pages. ..
icon, glasses, love, cute, chibi

Keeping It

Second part to Promises. (Highly recommended you read that first to understand things!)

Title: Keeping It
Author:
octobertwelfth (LJ account), Defection (CSI Forensics account)
Pairing:
Horatio/Ryan
Spoilers?
Nope.
Rating:
NC-17

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Much love!

Lana <3
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